Sunday, September 19, 2010

Sunset

If I was a wonderful painter and my parents let me paint anything I wanted on my bedroom walls, I would paint my favorite scenery. I'd paint the sunset at the beach. There would be lots of purple and pink and orange in the sky,and the water would be very calm. The clouds would be very thin but together. The sand would be damp and you'd see the footprints of the seagulls. The scenery would cover the largest wall in my room, and I would wake up in the beach everyday.

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  1. "If I was a wonderful painter and my parents let me paint anything I wanted on my bedrrom walls I would paint my favorite scenery..."
    You should rephrase that sentence. I wanted on my bedroom walls I would paint my favorite scenery?
    "you'd see the steps of the seagulls." You mean footprints? Also, it should be rephases, such as " The sand would be so moist you could see the foot-prints of the seagulls.
    Interesting story :)

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